Monday, August 29, 2011

False writing

So you're saying that the murder victim assumed a false identity? But that's not right at all. Five days ago one of the 25 comments included this:
It should read something like: "Since the killing of Randhawa, Vancouver police had been pursuing Singh — who allegedly had assumed a false identity — nearly capturing him on a few occasions, police said Tuesday."
Yet that sentence (from "Accused killer of Vancouver woman did not act alone" on CBC News online on August 24, 2011) remains unchanged.

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