Thursday, September 23, 2010

star of movies such as "The Wedding Planner"; after a four year ratings decline; We are 10 years-old; star of movies like "The Wedding Planner"

There's nothing wrong with this sentence from "Steven Tyler and Jennifer Lopez join revamped American Idol" on Yahoo! Canada News on September 22, 2010, but remember that Lopez is the star of movies such as "The Wedding Planner". Moving on,

there needs to be a hyphen in four-year ratings decline, and

the hyphen in We are 10 years-old needs to be removed. Finally,

remember how Lopez is the star of movies like "The Wedding Planner"? I guess Yahoo! just wanted to make sure you hadn't forgotten.

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