Saturday, September 18, 2010

several European GranFondo's; slower riders might holding up faster ones; recognize him as he motionless on the side; he's and endurance athlete

The first error in this article ("GranFondo crash victim remains in coma" on CBC News online on September 15, 2010) occurs when the writer inserts an apostrophe into a simple plural. Then,

I think this could be corrected to slower riders might hold up faster ones. Next,

a word is missing from between he and motionless. I suggest laid. Finally,

and should clearly be an. Well, that's clear to me, but I don't write for CBC. Click an image to enlarge it.

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