Saturday, May 8, 2010

suspicions he used performance enhancing drugs, according to a Major League Baseball players.

Two errors in one sentence in "Bonds respected" in yesterday's 24H Vancouver. First, there needs to be a hyphen in performance-enhancing drugs. Second, (assuming it's not just one player who thinks Bonds should be in the HoF) either omit the single-letter word a or add in poll of after the a.

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