Saturday, December 26, 2009

an nondenominational floor party. (Tip: you might want to run this one by your neighbours first and while you're at it, make sure they don't have any

This article about celebrating the holiday season - "Get gussied up for party season" in 24H Vancouver on December 11, 2009 - has a few errors. First, nondemoninational does not begin with a vowel sound, so it should be a nondenominational floor party. Second, since the entire sentence is within the parentheses, the period at the very end of the above image should be placed inside the closing parenthesis. That's not all:
The third error of the article is the missing a before line, unless drop 'em line is the opposite of pick-up line.

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