Friday, May 1, 2009

"Mr. O Canada" played down the impact his now-iconic anthem, which gets fans at GM Place singing in unison.

-- "Singer boosts Canucks faithful" in Vancouver 24 hours on May 1, 2009

There's a saying, 'leave them wanting more,' but it should go without saying that it shouldn't be done at the expense of complete sentences. A potential fix: inserting of between impact and his.

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