Sunday, May 31, 2009

do gentleman prefer blondes; subconsciouly; brunettes are more victorious is relationships based on their hair color

-- "Date the blonde, marry the brunette? Archie proposes to Veronica" on Yahoo! Shine's Love + Sex on May 29, 2009

Gentleman should be in the plural form. Subconsciouly needs a third S. I think I know the fix required for the final nonsensical sentence: change is to in.

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