Monday, February 23, 2009

all our contributor's; one job... mentioned over and over again: Mom and dad; strange metaphors such "melted cheese" or "vodka" (... quite literal.)

-- "Six words" in Vancouver 24 hours on February 23, 2009

Six words: Was someone paid to write this?

The answer is probably "yes," because there is a name attached to the article. And now, quickly, the corrections. Plural of contributor is contributors, sans apostrophe. Mom and dad are two jobs. I would've accepted parent as a three-words-for-one trade. Insert as after such, and take the period that is currently after literal and put it after the closing parenthesis.

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