Saturday, June 14, 2008

request that: the ability

We the members whom have joined this group hereby request that:
1. No application ask or require us to invite our facebook friends to anything for any reason.
2. The ability and privacy to block ALL application requests.
-- Official Facebook Petition: To ban the inviting of friends on Applications(group) on facebook.com, Saturday June 14 2008

Reading continuously from We the members to the end of the first request makes sense, but if one reads from We the members to the end of the second request (bypassing request one), it doesn't make sense. My request is to put the colon after the word request and to put the word that at the start of the first request. The second request can stay as-is and would then make sense! The quote above is the group's entire description and - as of this sentence being written - the group has 1,092,217 members.

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